The pebble (100 word challenge)

One bright sunny day, 2 adventurous boys called Tim and Timmy escaped from their house into a dismal forest. They kept on exploring until they found a black pebble. Tim said “What is that?”, Timmy replied “I don’t know, but it looks good for our collection”. They went to pick it up but then the pebble turned into a black witch and said “I will capture you”. Then Tim and Timmy ran, but the witch was just on their tail. They kept on running and luckily they reached their house, slammed the door and ran to their bedroom panting.

5 thoughts on “The pebble (100 word challenge)

  1. hello Prince

    Your 100 word challenge is amazing and it looked as if you really struggled while you were doing your 100 word challenge and you have made me want to be there.

    You could have added at the bottom of it why you did it and how you struggled. I struggled on mine as it was really hard when your only supposed to put 100 words onto it but luckily i managed t do it.

    By Hope

  2. hello Prince

    Your 100 word challenge is amazing and it looked as if you really struggled while you were doing your 100 word challenge and you have made me want to be there.

    You could have added at the bottom of it why you did it and how you struggled. I struggled on mine as it was really hard when your only supposed to put 100 words onto it but luckily i managed t do it.
    By Hope

  3. Hi Prince

    That story was so good that when i got to the end i was disappointed because i want this story to be extended. If you could of fitted in some adjectives about the pebble this story would be amazing.

  4. Hello Prince,

    I enjoyed reading your scary 100 word challenge and I particularly liked the fact that the boys found a pebble that turned into a witch.

    Your description of the ‘dismal forest’ is great. The perfect setting for a witch!

    Good use of the photo prompt, well done.

    Mrs W (Team 100 WC, UK).

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